Foundation portfolio- Rough Edit & feedback




Feedback:

- good changes in sound, makes the flashbacks very clear that they are flashbacks 
- i like the blurry effect on the flashbacks, again makes it very clear that they are flashbacks 
- maybe play around with different audio, switch up the song to something more sinister a bit earlier to build more suspense? j a thought 
- really solid transitions 
- put together really well the storyline actually makes sense 
- something more dramatic on the "one by one" bit w the cards because the song running through it didnt really build it to a big moment yk? 
- loved the ending, good place to have that clip leaves u on a suspense note 
- maybe add a thud tho or something just to emphasise it yk?
- overall u done so good man good job chanalussy :)

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