Foundation portfolio- Rough Edit & feedback
Feedback:
- i like the blurry effect on the flashbacks, again makes it very clear that they are flashbacks
- maybe play around with different audio, switch up the song to something more sinister a bit
earlier to build more suspense? j a thought
- really solid transitions
- put together really well the storyline actually makes sense
- something more dramatic on the "one by one" bit w the cards because the song running through it
didnt really build it to a big moment yk?
- loved the ending, good place to have that clip leaves u on a suspense note
- maybe add a thud tho or something just to emphasise it yk?
- overall u done so good man good job chanalussy :)
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