Preliminary Task 1 - Rough Edit

Rough Edit for 'Tyrant'



Notes for feedback:

Areas that were effective/successful:

  • Music- lined up well with the clips
  • Existing sound effects coupled with music to increase the effect.
  • Smooth transitions
  • Really effective after effects in the Title
  • Blur/ Focusing in and out was effective
  • Video transitions effects were effective

Areas that could be improved:

  • More sound effects can be added (e.g. punch)
  • Could play around with the ending
  • Needs to be slightly shorter
  • Credits need to be added
  • Some one-on-one shots are a bit long and can be cut to bring the time down
  • Seems a bit too much like a trailer
  • tension can be cut down a but more in some areas like when Jack is walking alone

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